Monday, 26 October 2015

Narrative story
Max the Merboy
My merboy is called Max he has sparkly fins. He lives in a palace. He has a sparkly palace with a bubble elevator to get to the top.
Oh! no the dolphins are trapped I have to save them! thought Max.  The sharks was in the net.He was trying to eat the dolphins. Max cut the rope with his knife and the dolphins were free.
Max killed the shark.
"yah! I am a hero!" said Max.
Max saved the dolphins. One dolphin said "we're save here, thank you Max"

by Alfonze

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