Friday, 16 October 2015

Treasure

A narrative story by SaAnDreas

My merboy is called Diesel. He has blue shorts and green hair. His eyes are sparkly the sparkles are green and blue. He lives in a palace under the water.
The pirates were sailing across the water. They found an island and stopped. They didn't see Diesal the merboy watching.The island had treasure buried in a cave. It belonged to the mermaids.The pirates found the treasure map.
They dropped the map in the water and it got wet. They couldn't see the X mark. The treasure got lost
.The pirates got a metal detector. They found the treasure.The pirates were happy but Diesal was angry.



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